Second Peer Response

Emily, first off let me apologize, Blogspot has not been registering my posts whenever I have tried to post. A short time ago it allowed me to post my response to Jim's, I can only hope Blogspot will allow this response to post...

Emily, I really love your topic, I find it very interesting and I believe it is one to keep an eye on! Your sources appear to be very legitimate and each source contains loads of information. Keep an eye on your spelling and grammatical errors, possibly typing each post on some type of program such as word, pages or open office might limit those errors. I wonder if your responses could be a tad longer? Try to proportion your responses and notes in a way that shows complete thinking and truly reflects upon the article. I found the interview intriguing to read and commend you for being able to arrange that interview! As a whole, excellent idea, I see this building into a very resourceful blog.